For today’s practice, writing a report for about the following information. Next week I’ll give you some tips and show you part of my answer.
The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph compares Colombia,Japan and Myanmar in clothing exports between 1999 and 2003.Units are given in million dollars.Overall,the income got from clothing exports is obviously varied in terms of countries and years.The most significant figures were reported for Myanmar.
In 1999,Myanmar’s income from clothing exports was equal to 0 however, until the next year this figure rose sharply to 800 million dollars.Although,in 2001 Myanmar’s income peaked at around 950 million dollars,over the next two years this country was in the last place in clothing exports.
At the beginning of period,Japan was in the first place in clothing exports income however,until 2002 this figure fluctuated slightly around 550 and 600 million dollars and finished at just under 500 million dollars.
In comparison to Japan,Colombia showed an opposite trend .Being approximately 450 million dollars in 1999,this figure increased gradually to exactly 700 million dollars until 2002.But in 2003 the income of Colombia got from clothing exports decreased to almost 600 million dollars.
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here my comment according to the task 1 evaluation cretiria
1) MADE COMPARISION/AVOID JUST LISTED POINTS: 0.70/1
2) DEVIDED INTO PARAGRAPHS: 1/1
3) AVOID REPETITION OF WORDS AND GRAMMATICAL STRUCTURE: 1/1
4) INCLUDE AN OVERVIEW: 1/1
5) USE CORRECT TENSES:1/1
6) APPROPIATE ADVERBIALS OF LOCATION: 1/1
7) USE OF RANGE OF SYNONYMS: 0.8/1
8) LINK APPROPIATE LINKING DEVISES: 0.8/1
9) MENTION STRINING FEATURES: 0.7/1
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